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I feel
my eyes drowning in tears
sadness filling my body
bit by bit
as i realze
... there is no-one for me.

I don't want to be alone.
I don't want to be unloved.

But
There is no way to denie the truth
No way to make things better
I am alone
I am unloved

I protect
Myself
From everything in this world
'Cause no-one else will do it
... Let the tears protect him.

I don't want this.
I don't want this life.

Love
Is what I need
My only reason to live for
Without it...
I am dead inside.

Love me.
Please.
Just came from my heart..
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loveamysteriousthing Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
Love will find those who need it. Just give it time.
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SomethinGrimm Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011
look at this way.

someone has to love you because out there there is a perfect person out there for every one, even if it seems so far away but it could be right around the corner, Love is a thing that is a mystery and you just may be looking at the wrong person look towards some one else and see how you feel about them and if you still fell for the other person go for them. and don't hold back!
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ingeline-art Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011   Traditional Artist
When I read your words that contact me soo much - I know this feelings -and it's not easy to live with them!
I wish you much power to do it and I will pray for you!
God bless you Ingeline ;-)))
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DontHurtMePlease Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011
Thank you ^^
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hasnopants Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
I really fell this...:tears:
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lulugurl Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
i really like this ....
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DontHurtMePlease Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011
Thank you.
What makes you to like it?
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lulugurl Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
because i feel the same way ....i guess it kinda represents my emotions
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DontHurtMePlease Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011
Yeah..
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TheCriticofInnocence Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Student General Artist
A person, starved of love for too long, can lose their way...
You seem like one of those people. And, through that pain comes a wonderful, yet tortured poem. Perfect. (though "denie" should be "deny".)

Tell me, do you believe in God?
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DontHurtMePlease Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011
I don't know do I... And it is not perfect..
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TheCriticofInnocence Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Student General Artist
Well, if you don't... then let me enlighten you, in the best way I can.
As a Christian, I believe that there is a divine being. A being that we cannot see, yet is always there, through our troubles and trials. He is a kind, merciful being, who created us out of love and loves everyone, for everyone is created from him.( contrary to what an ignorant part of my religion says...)
I think He might be able to give you some hope...

Well, without taking into account the spelling error( since you aren't too skilled in english...and "realze" should be "realize") I think it is perfect. It comes from your own soul, which gives it so much feeling. The rhythm you create through the lines of the poem only re-enforces that feeling. thus, it is perfect to me.
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DontHurtMePlease Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011
Oops i think realze was a typo, my bad. <.< this is why i should also watch what I write
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TheCriticofInnocence Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Student General Artist
Well, I'm forever plagued by typos myself^^;.
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hello-there-gorgeous Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Student Photographer
:cuddle: this is absolutely gorgeous!!!!
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DontHurtMePlease Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011
Thank you though..
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hello-there-gorgeous Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Student Photographer
welcome :huggle:
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CoralineUchiha Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i love your poem. i understand how you feel about feeling unloved. but your not unloved and your not alone. lots of people feel how you feel. and im sure lots of people love you, that you take for granted. (im sure thats what happening for me.) but i dont really know you. so i not sure what your going through. but lovely peom.
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DontHurtMePlease Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011
no one really loves
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CoralineUchiha Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i love. i love a lot. i love to much. with no love given back. i dont feel the love. but i give it unconditionally. i love with out knowing. i love too much.
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DontHurtMePlease Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011
what does that mean then..
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CoralineUchiha Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
read it like poetry.
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CoralineUchiha Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
P.S. how do you upload your poems?
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SomethinGrimm Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011
you go to submit art and click add text copy paste that's how I do it...
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CoralineUchiha Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i done it
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CoralineUchiha Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
but what do i know.
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Shlonka Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow, thats really beautiful.....
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DontHurtMePlease Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011
thank you, though i think it isnt..
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CoralineUchiha Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
stop it. dont do that to yourself. its a bad habit. it like me saying i dont like how i draw, im weird. we both need to stop with the but downs on ourselves, and anybody else who do it too,
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Gigari Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
it feels like you put ur whole self into this. nice job...i'm sorry that you feel unloved, but we care (:
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DontHurtMePlease Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011
Yeah..
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wolflllover Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Awh! I'm sure there are plenty of people who love you. Your friends, your parents, your grandparents and cousins, etc.
This is yet another great poem, keep writing. :)
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DontHurtMePlease Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011
I dont have parents, grandparents or cousins. or well, i have parents, other tries to kill me and other does nothing. And I dont have friends..
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wolflllover Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Well, everyone has parents at some point in their lives, and you may have cousins that you don't even know about. As for grandparents, I can understand how you might not have any.
Oh jeez, one of your parents tries to kill you?? :worry: I really hope you're not living with them! Either way, I'd rather live with the one that does nothing than live with someone who tries to kill me.
I could be your friend :)
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